The End: Story One - The Great Escape Pt4 By: David K. Montoya


The End:Story One
The Great Escape Pt4
By: David K. Montoya

I could see the girls. They were already inside the SUV, except for Tina, who was standing next to it holding the door open, waving toward us to get a move on. When I heard the motor start, a surge of adrenaline shot through me and I began to run faster. Even though I had my brother over my shoulder, which slowed me a bit, I went into a full-on sprint to the vehicle. The professor and Michael got there first, but I was not too far behind.

Finally, I ran up to them and Rose helped pull Rich inside. Then I got in, and still looking at Richard, I held my hand out to help my sister in, but she never grabbed my hand. When I looked back over my shoulder, I saw that she was on the ground, bleeding from a hole in the center of her chest. Jumping out to get her, I heard gun shots ring out through the parking lot. Arch Commander Patrick and his men were running toward us. I scooped Tina up in my arms and got her inside the SUV as fast as I could. Michael put down his weapon to help me with Tina. I was about to get in when someone pulled me from behind. Before I knew it, Patrick was on top of me, trying to put his gun in my face. He was much stronger than I originally thought. The Arch Commander forced the gun barrel to the side of my head. Suddenly, I was showered with bone and bits of brain matter, and lifeless, Patrick collapsed. Looking up, I saw Michael standing above me, still holding out his gun.

Silence fell upon the parking lot; now that both of their leaders were dead, the guards stopped shooting at us and ran away.

Finally inside the SUV, Rose hit the gas and we sped away from Palace City. I sat there holding Tina in my arms as she was gasping frantically for breath. All I could do was hold her tight and try to comfort her, running my fingers though her hair. Everyone kept looking back over at us with tears running down their faces. But I didn't cry, not even when she took her last breath.

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